August 15, 2012
The beginning of things…

Lidia, a novel by A. N. DeBerry. (Opening lines v.001)

     Once, long ago, this place was a city. A place of countless marvels, seemingly alive to some. Of towers belted with clouds; an endless sea of shimmering shards reflecting the skies that bound them. And yet to others, a vile thing that seemed to exhale poison. A creature of glass and stone teeth, steel bones and veins of road, clothed in a catching filth.


March 13, 2012
A look back at Script Frenzy 2011!

A few pages of my Script Frenzy screenplay from last year, and no I did not finish it! Yes I know, shame! It started off as a simple idea then morphed into stranger fields like metaphysics, the nature of perception it’s self, religion and lots more. I know, I got carried away with a good idea, that soon became a great idea, which at times for us writers, can also mean an impossible idea! 

Lidia is a world with the usual cyberpunk themes and a few new ones. Corporations that rival for power, as governments bend to their power. Social differences are vast and near permanent! Mega cities and mega slums. World wide connections dependent on bio components, I call Technicians.

The tag line was, “Evolution is not always forwards, at times it moves back.”

‘Lidia’ A Script by Akil N. DeBerry

Cyberpunk

(UNEDITED)

          FADE IN:                                                         

          EXT. OUTER CITY - THE FIELDS - DAY                               

          A group of young boys sit, crouched beside a wide ribbon of      

          trash and debris. They dig in the trash until their hands        

          strike a dampness that covers their hands with cold water.       

          They take an assortment of varying sized buckets, stained        

          and dirty, and plunge them beneath the trash using the holes     

          they dug by hand. When they pull the buckets up, they splash     

          with the cold river water that lays beneath the thick veneer     

          of trash and waste.                                              

          With their buckets in hand they run up a narrow trail,           

          littered with trash and covered by a dense forest canopy.        

          They stop and and look at their home.                            

          EXT. OUTER CITY - THE GROVE - DAY                                

          The Grove, a mega slum towering into the sky on the backs of     

          oblong and misshaped buildings built from the very trash of      

          the mega city of Lidia, and topped with a forest, that fill      

          it’s combined roofs.                                             

          The boys continue their run through the thick masses that        

          fill the cramped slum, of winding streets and narrow spaces.     

          They come to an entrance at the base of one of the massive       

          buildings and run inside.                                        

          INT. SLUM BUILDING - DAY                                         

          They run up a flight of lopsided stairs. A combination of        

          electrical cables and roots webbing and knotting along the       

          buildings’ ceilings and walls, of it’s dark lightless halls      

          and corridors.                                                   

          They come to a large room that has a rift in its ceiling,        

          leaving it open to the sky, hundreds of feet up. A group of      

          men man a fire pit that holds a massive cauldron of bubbling     

          water in which the young boys add their contribution from        

          the river.                                                       

                              MAN 1                                        

                    Nicely done, boys.                                     

          The man gives each of them an approving smile and then goes      

          back to manning the flames.                                                                                                    

          The men place a large metal top on top the cauldron, that        

          has a long spout that runs down and drips the steamed water      

          into large buckets.                                              

          The men grab buckets of clean water and begin to carry them      

          deeper into the building. The young boys, taking two of them     

          to carry a single bucket follow the men slowly but               

          determinedly.                                                    

          They come to a door surrounded by people, all carrying           

          worried or concerned expression.                                 

          The sound of CRIES and MOANING permeate the door from the        

          other side.                                                      

          The men place the buckets of water down, next to the door. A     

          woman opens the door as they do, the SCREAMS of pain fill        

          the long narrow halls.                                           

                              MIDWIFE 1                                    

                    Thank you, more then enough.                           

          She forced a smile.                                              

                              MAN 1                                        

                    Is there anything else we can do.                      

                              MIDWIFE 1                                    

                    No, no the others should be on                         

                    their way with…                                    

          The women stops and looks down the corridor in the opposite      

          direction the men came from, as did everyone. A group of         

          women where moving almost at a run for the room.                 

                              MIDWIFE 1                                    

                    Here they are. No, we need nothing                     

                    else but stay close, just encase.                      

                              MAN 1                                        

                    Of course.                                             

          The group of women finish the distance to the door and hand      

          the MIDWIFE a bundle of tattered rages.                          

                              WOMEN 2                                      

                    They’re the cleanest we could find,                    

                    I hope it’s enough.                                    

                              MIDWIFE 1                                    

                    It will have to be.                                    

          SCREAMS fill the corridor from behind the door.                  

          INT. SLUM BUILDING - LIVING SPACE - DAY                          

          In the the filth and dirt that covers the tight, cramp room,     

          a young women CRIES out in pain, surrounded by a small group     

          of women. Candles fill the windowless room with a warm           

          light.                                                           

          A man sits in a corner and looks on with concern flooding        

          his features.                                                    

          The young women is giving birth.                                 

          She wales as she pushes, as the Midwives help as much as         

          they can.                                                        

          The young women CRIES out and one of the Midwives around her     

          reaches down and pulls up into view, a baby boy.                 

          A midwife brings the bundle of tattered rags and unrolls         

          them. She then shakes her head at the dirt stained cloths.       

          She looks down at her dress, a much cleaner garment even         

          with the edged border of grime along the dress’s hem. The        

          midwife looks to the others and shrugs. She drops the rages      

          and tears a good portion of her dress, shakes it free of         

          loose dirt and then hands it to the others.                      

          They rap the baby in the dress and hand the baby to the          

          mother. The man in the corner, the father, moves to the          

          mother and kisses them both.                                     

                                                              FADE TO:     

          EXT. OUTER CITY - THE FIELDS - DAY                               

          Ten years later.                                                 

          A boy runs through the fields of trash with his friends,         

          laughing and playing.                                            

          They come up to a clearing and pause in awe as they gaze         

          into the distance.                                               

          The boy looks on, smiling.                                       

          A loud spike of STATIC burst into life, and only the boy         

          reacts to the deafening sound.                                   

          He becomes scared and frightened as his vision pixalates,        

          and  the sound of STATIC and countless VOICES grow in his        

          head. He falls to the ground screaming. His friends crowed       

          around him, in worry.                                            

          The boy squeezes his he eyes Shut.                               

          BOY’S POV                                                        

          In the blackness the hectic waling of VOICES, STATIC and the     

          boys quickened BREATHING peak, then begin to slowly fade as      

          the boys BREATHING slows and steadies. Replaced by a growing     

          sound of a woman’s SINGING, but that to quickly fades.           

          RETURN TO SCENE:                                                 

          The boy opens his eyes, his friends help him up with worried     

          faces. The boy looks to them smiling, and then locks eyes        

          with the mega city of Lidia in the distance.                     

                                                              FADE TO:     

          INT. OUTER CITY - THE GROVE - DAY                                

          A year later.                                                    

          The boy walks through the body packed streets, the towering      

          slums blocking much of the open sky, the forest on their         

          tops blocking what ever was left.                                

          The boy shakes his head, and looks disoriented. He moves to      

          a side alley and hunches in the filth. The crushing sound of     

          STATIC and VOICES fill his head. He shakes in pain.              

          He closes his eyes, and begins to breath deeply. The sound       

          of STATIC and VOICES fade and becomes slowly replaced by a       

          woman’s SINGING, but that to quickly fades.                      

          The boy open’s his eyes and smiles.                              

                                                              FADE TO:     

          INT. SLUM BUILDING - BOY’S ROOM - DAY                            

          The boy lights a candle, filling his cramped, windowless         

          room with orange light. He sits down in a corner of the room     

          and closes his eyes. He breaths deeply.                          

          He moves his head about, as if searching for something with      

          his closed eyes. Turning his head to the side, he hears it.      

          Lowly, barely audible to him, he hears the sound of a woman      

          SINGING, but it soon fades away. He open’s his eyes and          

          smiles. With a face of triumph he closes his eyes and again      

          try’s to hear the song.                                             

          EXT. SLUM BUILDING - ROOF - DAY                                  

          Climbing from out of a crack that splits the buildings open,     

          the boy pulls hims self up to it’s roof. He walks amongst        

          the sea of antenna and wires that cover the roof almost as       

          thickly as the dense roots. Antenna stand attached to            

          anything, building or tree trunk clustering the elevated         

          forest bed with webs of metal.                                   

          He comes to the edge of the forest, and the edge of the          

          buildings’ roof and sits against a broad tree trunk, facing      

          the mega city in the distance. Holding his folded knees in       

          his arms he closes his eyes and concentrates.                    

          GROVE FOREST - TIME LAPSE MONTAGE                                

          The boy holds his siting position, but his cloths and hair       

          rapidly change as the sky turns from day to night and back       

          again.                                                           

          As he sits the sounds of STATIC and countless VOICES grow so     

          loud that they become no longer distinguishable.                 

          The boy’s head turns to the side and concentration fills his     

          features. The sound of his slow and steady BREATHING begins      

          to over power the noise of STATIC and VOICES.                    

          All the sounds slowly begin to fade away, leaving the boy in     

          a soundless void.                                                

          And out of this void a faint sound of SINGING grows slowly,      

          until it fills everything, the slum, the forest, and the         

          boy.                                                             

          The boy open’s his eyes and smiles, the sound of SINGING         

          staying with him, and not once fading.                           

                                                              FADE TO:     

          INT. REPUBLIC OF LIDIA - KARDON CORPORATION HQ - MEETING         

          ROOM - DAY                                                       

          A group of men sit around a table, in a grand room that          

          looks out over the entire city.                                  

                              CHAIRMEN DIRECTOR SMITH                      

                    It has come to my attention that                       

                    our population of Techs has                            

                    steadily been dropping, what is the                    

                    reason?                                              

                              DIRECTOR JOHNSON                             

                    It is true, I fear Mr. Chairmen.                       

                    Other companies have been sending                      

                    out heavy recruiting patrols, to                       

                    every possible corner of the world.                    

                    Even here, foreign corporations                        

                    have invaded our land and stole our                    

                    most precious commodity.                               

                              DIRECTOR WILLIAMS                            

                    It was only last quarter when a                        

                    division of our men stumbled across                    

                    a foreign cell. We attempted to                        

                    capture one alive, but by the time                     

                    the smoke cleared all were                             

                    terminated.                                            

                              CHAIRMEN DIRECTOR SMITH                      

                    What is our current holdings in                        

                    terms of Technicians?                                  

                              DIRECTOR JONES                               

                    Currently our bank of Technicians                      

                    numbers 60,000 fully trained and                       

                    operational and an additional                          

                    12,000, currently in training.                         

                              CHAIRMEN DIRECTOR SMITH                      

                    And our competition?                                   

                              DIRECTOR JONES                               

                    As our current information holds,                      

                    Steiner Corp. a mere 30,000. Horak                     

                    Industries an estimated 52,000.                        

                    Morozov Inc. 26,000. And our main                      

                    comparator Thomson Dynamics,                           

                    68,000.                                                

          The room of men shift in their seats uncomfortably.              

                              CHAIRMEN DIRECTOR SMITH                      

                    As of today, all Tech recruiting                       

                    will be boosted by 40%. We are the                     

                    world’s great power, and it will                       

                    remain so! Director Jones.                             

                              DIRECTOR JONES                               

                    Yes, Mr. Chairmen?                                     

                              CHAIRMEN DIRECTOR SMITH                      

                    Amplify and boost all city wide                        

                    signals. I want every last soul,                       

                    sensitive to Analog Sickness to cry              

                    out in the streets for our gracious                    

                    help. Every soul inside… and                       

                    outside the city.                                      

          The corporation finds more techs in the Grove then the city,     

          because signals a far weaker normally when they leave the        

          city. So the Corporation aims signals directly at the Grove      

          to gather all the A.S. victims that they had missed over the     

          past years.                                                      

                              DIRECTOR JONES                               

                    As you wish, Mr. Chairmen.                             

          INT. REPUBLIC OF LIDIA - KARDON CORPORATION TOWER - CONTROL      

          ROOM - DAY                                                       

          Director Jones walks through the highly advanced building to     

          the main control room.                                           

          A scientist looks to him as he walks into the room.              

          Director Jones nodes to the scientist, then leaves.              

          The scientist moves to a control board, and begins the           

          process of amping the city’s signals.                            

          INT. SLUM BUILDING - BOY’S ROOM - NIGHT                          

          The boy lays in his bed, asleep and dreaming soundly along       

          with the sound of a woman’s SINGING.                             

          The SINGING is slowly replaced by a deafening amount of          

          STATIC and VOICES. The boy wakes in shock to the noise, and      

          stumbles to his feet.                                            

          Confused, he stands still and closes his eyes, breathing         

          deeply. The sounds begin to lower, but then stop.                

          The boy open’s his eyes, fear filling his face as the sound      

          of STATIC and VOICES fill his head, yet not till bursting.       

          He falls to his knees and begins to rock back and forth.         

          CITY OF LIDIA - MONTAGE                                          

          INT. REPUBLIC OF LIDIA - GROCERY STORE - DAY                     

          A women is busy at work in a grocery store. She falls to the     

          ground screaming, holding her head in her hands.                 

          A group of men, Recruiters, walk into the grocery store          

          through the crowd of people standing over the women. One of      

          the Recruiters places a small device on her neck. The women      

          stops shouting.                                                  

          The Recruiters walk her to their vehicle out side.               

          EXT. REPUBLIC OF LIDIA - STREET - DAY                            

          A man driving his vehicle, jumps and grabs his head in shock     

          as it’s filled with a crushing noise of STATIC and VOICES.       

          He swerves off the road and into a building.                     

          Recruiters arrive and walk up to the crashed vehicle. They       

          open the vehicle door, and the man is still inside, rocking      

          back and forth. One of them place a small device on his neck     

          and he stops screaming.                                          

          The Recruiters walk the man to their vehicle.                    

          EXT. REPUBLIC OF LIDIA - STREETS - DAY                           

          SCREAMS of pain and fear fill the streets of Lidia, as           

          hundreds of Recruiters fill and scour the streets, Their         

          vehicles filling the streets of the city.                        

                                                              FADE TO:     

          EXT. OUTER CITY - THE GROVE - MONTAGE                            

          Recruiters walk and fill the streets and buildings,              

          searching. Groups of recruiters enter the hundreds of            

          buildings, as other groups exit with a person in their           

          custody, a small device flashing on their necks.                 

          INT. SLUM BUILDING - DAY                                         

          A group of  armed Recruiters walk through the dark               

          corridors, as people try their best to get out of their way.     

                              RECRUITER 1                                  

                    What are we doing back in this                         

                    sector?                                         

                              RECRUITER 2                                  

                    Scouts were receiving some strange                     

                    signal patterns in this area,                          

                    possibly a Corporation Cell.                           

                              RECRUITER 3                                  

                    So, here to investigate, and if                        

                    need be…                                           

          RECRUITER 3 locks and loads his weapon.                          

                              RECRUITER 3                                  

                    Terminate.                                             

          The squad of Recruiters come to a door, and position them        

          selves around it.                                                

                              RECRUITER 1                                  

                    Go!                                                    

          The squad burst into the room.                                   

          INT. SLUM BUILDING - LIVING SPACE - DAY                          

          The squad discover a single man and a single women in the        

          room, force them to the ground, and search the room.             

          A pair move on to the other rooms but find nothing. Upon the     

          last room, they burst in, guns ready to fire.                    

          INT. SLUM BUILDING - BOY’S ROOM - DAY                            

          The boy sits in the corner of the room, completely oblivious     

          to the armed men, rocking back and forth. Not making a           

          single sound, eyes closed.                                       

          The Recruiters enter the room, and look at the boy               

          curiously.                                                       

                              RECRUITER 1                                  

                    Have you ever seen that?                               

                              RECRUITER 2                                  

                    Never.                                                 

                              RECRUITER 3                                  

                    He’s suffering from A.S., but he’s                     

                    holding the full force of it back                      

                    somehow. I’ve never meet one that                      

                    wasn’t screaming.                                      

                              RECRUITER 1                                  

                    Parks! Get me a reading!                               

          Recruiter PARKS pulls from his belt pouch a scanning device      

          and holds it in front of the boy.                                

                              RECRUITER PARKS                              

                    He’s reading hot sir. Sir…                         

                              RECRUITER 1                                  

                    What is it Parks?                                      

                              RECRUITER PARKS                              

                    This boy… the boy is the                           

                    disturbance, all signals around him                    

                    are being… bent away?                              

                              RECRUITER 1                                  

                    Snap him out of it, tag him!                           

          Parks pulls a tag from his pouch and places it on the boy’s      

          neck, the tag begins to flash. The boy open’s his eyes.          

                              BOY                                          

                    Who are you. Where’s mom and dad?                      

                              RECRUITER 1                                  

                    What were you doing, just now?                         

                              BOY                                          

                         (confusedly)                                      

                    Listening.                                             

                              RECRUITER 1                                  

                    To what?                                               

                              BOY                                          

                    The music. It helps keep the noise                     

                    out. Where’s mom and dad?                              

                              RECRUITER 1                                  

                    You’ve got new parents now.                            

          The lead Recruiter turns from the boy, to his men.               

                              RECRUITER 1                                  

                    Call HQ, tell them we have                             

                    something… something new.   

          EXT. OUTER CITY - THE GROVE - DAY                                

          The group of armed Recruiters and the Boy exit the building.     

          They walk through the Grove as the other Recruiters go about     

          their work. But as they move through the slum the eyes of        

          everyone falls on the small boy and the armed Recruiters         

          escorting him, with guns drawn.                                  

          They arrive at their vehicle and help the boy in.                

          The Vehicle moves out, at the head of a progression of like      

          Vehicles, that run back endlessly into the slum                  

          INT. RECRUITER VEHICLE - DAY                                     

                              RECRUITER 1                                  

                    What are HQ’s orders?                                  

          The Recruiter driving answers.                                   

                              DRIVING RECRUITER                            

                    We haven’t been able to get a clear                    

                    line. We’re getting nothing but                        

                    noise, there’s interference coming                     

                    from somewhere.                                        

          All the Recruiter’s in the back of the vehicle look to each      

          other then at the young boy, who sits smiling deeply.            

                              RECRUITER 2                                  

                    Can’t be. Is his tag working, he                       

                    should be shielded.                                    

                              RECRUITER 1                                  

                    Parks?                                                 

          Recruiter Parks takes out a scanner and checks the tag.          

                              RECRUITER PARKS                              

                    No the tag is working properly,                        

                    but… He’s receiving signals any                    

                    way. Not signals…                                  

          BOY’S POV                                                        

          The boy looks up to the Recruiters talking, but hears            

          nothing they say. Their voices are muted by the sound of a       

          woman’s SINGING.                                                 

          RETURN TO SCENE:   

                              RECRUITER PARKS (CONT’D)                     

                    Noise? He’s forcefully pulling                         

                    noise through the shield tag?                          

          The Recruiters look at each other uncomfortably.                 

          RETURN TO SCENE:                                                 

                                                              FADE TO:     

          INT. RECRUITER PROCESSING CENTER - DAY                           

          The Recruiter’s vehicle comes to a stop in a massive room,       

          lined with similar vehicles and other types.                     

          A stream of people, escorted by Recruiters are making their      

          way through the room, to a white hall in the distance.           

          The vehicle door opens and the Recruiter’s hop out, still        

          carrying their guns at the ready. They make sure the area is     

          secure, and then motion for the boy to come out.                 

          The boy steps out and looks at the cleanness of the room.        

          The Recruiters begin to move and the boy follows.                

          The boy looks ahead at the white hall, where everyone one is     

          headed, but then looks confused when the armed Recruiters        

          veer him to the right to a large elevator.                       

          The boy enters the elevator, followed by the Recruiters, who     

          surround him, facing out as the elevator doors close.            

          INT. RECRUITER PROCESSING CENTER - SHUTTLE ROOM - DAY            

          The elevator opens, then the armed Recruiters exit, keeping      

          an eye on the perimeter.                                         

          The shuttle room is lined with, great tubes, which are           

          filled with open topped shuttles, that ride an electric           

          single rail.                                                     

          The boy is escorted to the arriving shuttle. With part of        

          the group of Recruiters sitting in front and the other           

          behind him, the shuttle moves down the rail at a ever            

          growing speed.                                                   

          They travel a dark tunnel lined with lights, until up ahead,     

          day light strikes the tunnel tube.             

          INT./EXT. SHUTTLE TUNNEL/CITY OF LIDIA - DAY                     

          The shuttle tube exits the walled tunnel and exits into the      

          open air of the city, miles into the air, yet still between      

          the countless spires, towers and sky scrapers that fill the      

          sky endlessly in the distance.                                   

          The shuttle travels through the tube, about the building         

          tops, and the boy raises from his seat in shock, at The City     

          of Lidia.                                                        

          INT. KARDON CORPORATION SCIENCE LABS - DAY                       

          The shuttle stops inside a room part of the main lobby of        

          the building. Hundreds of people walk about, in fine dress       

          or lab coats, going about their task.                            

          The boy exits the shuttle and is escorted through the the        

          crowds, surrounded by a perimeter of the armed Recruiters,       

          and the massive lobby pauses and watches their progression.      

          INT. OBSERVATION ROOM - DAY                                      

          The young boy sits in the middle of a room, void of any          

          color but white. A bright light shining on him from above,       

          leaving shadows in the corners of the room. One of the rooms     

          walls, was completely glass, that only reflected the young       

          boys image.                                                      

          He sits, frightened. A VOICE sounds in the room from the         

          walls.                                                           

                              VOICE (O.S.)                                 

                    What is your name?                                     

                              BOY                                          

                    Akeno.                                                 

                              VOICE (O.S.)                                 

                    And how do you feel, Akeno?                            

                              AKENO                                        

                    Fine.                                                  

                              VOICE (O.S.)                                 

                    And now?                                               

          The room floods with signals, and AKENO grabs his head in        

          shock, closing his eyes, he rocks back and forth.                

          He begins to breath deeply, and the sounds of VOICES and         

          STATIC begin to fade, yet never leave him.     

          He looks up, shaking his head.                                   

                              VOICE (O.S.)                                 

                    What are you doing, are you aware                      

                    of what you are doing, Akeno.                          

                              AKENO                                        

                    Breathing, it helps the noise stop.                    

                              VOICE (O.S.)                                 

                    Yes it does. Who trained you,                          

                    taught you how to, to breath?                          

                              AKENO                                        

                    I did.                                                 

                              VOICE (O.S.)                                 

                    You?                                                   

                              AKENO                                        

                    No.                                                    

                              VOICE (O.S.)                                 

                    Then who?                                              

                              AKENO                                        

                    The song, I learned from the song.                     

                              VOICE (O.S.)                                 

                    Song?                                                  

          INT. OBSERVATION ROOM - OBSERVING ROOM - DAY                     

          A group of men stand behind another, dressed in white lab        

          coats. In a dark narrow room, with one of it’s walls made of     

          a glass that looked in of young Akeno.                           

          The man at the front of the group speaks, never looking away     

          from Akeno on the other side of the glass.                       

                              VOICE                                        

                    Interesting. Have him enter Tech                       

                    training, as all the others, but                       

                    keep a close eye on him. His                           

                    abilities to dampen signals around                     

                    him may mature into something else,                    

                    with teaching.                                         

          The men behind the man all node in agreement.                    

          INT. KARDON CORPORATION TRAINING FACILITY - MONTAGE              

          In a massive room with a high ceiling, hundreds of young         

          children sit cross legged on the floor, all dressed              

          identically. They sit motionlessly, eyes closed, features        

          firm, Akeno sits among them.                                     

          In a large room, 50 young children sit upon the floor, each      

          of their eyes following the movement of their instructor, as     

          he walks back and forth across the front of the room.            

          INT. KARDON CORPORATION TRAINING FACILITY - BOARD ROOM - DAY     

          In a long room, lined with windows that run it’s length,         

          showing the city of Lidia on the other side. A long row of       

          children sit upon the floor, facing each other with a large      

          display screen between them. The display is sectioned into       

          small grid blocks. Their is one white block at the bottom of     

          the display, representing the child facing the display, and      

          a black block at the top of the display, representing the        

          child on the other side of the display. An image appears on      

          the screen of their Instructor.                                  

                              INSTRUCTOR                                   

                    These are gird boards, the object                      

                    of this exercise is to capture all                     

                    the grids. When a grid is being                        

                    contested by your opponent, the                        

                    grid will begin to flash, giving                       

                    you warning. So you must capture                       

                    grids as quickly as possible, and                      

                    over ride the grids your opponent                      

                    has already taken… understood?                     

          The children all node to their INSTRUCTOR.                       

                              INSTRUCTOR                                   

                    Good, then begin.                                      

          The children close their eyes, some of their faces straining     

          with concentration. At first the grids light slowly towards      

          the opposite side of the board, but soon the children get        

          the trick of it and girds begin to flash endlessly across        

          the boards of the room, a small noise sounding as a child        

          wins a match.                                                    

          Akeno sits with eyes close like the rest, his face calm          

          without effort. The board before him lighting up faster then     

          any other, and sounding with a small noise. Faster and           

          faster Akeno wins his matches, until there is hardly a           

          second between the beginning of a match and the sounding of      

          a winners NOISE. His board springing with life, with lights,     

          devouring his opponents grids in a flash.                 

          As Akeno continues to consecrate harder and harder, a faint      

          sound begins to fill his head, the sound of SINGING. He          

          slowly opens his eyes, then slowly turns his head to look        

          behind him at the Lidia city scape. The sound grows.             

          The sound of the winners NOISE, sounding off constantly          

          draws the attention of all the other children in the room,       

          they all open their eyes to look down the row at Akeno, all      

          other games stopping, only his board lighting up.                

          Akeno board flashes with light, but stops, the sound of          

          SINGING leaving his head. He turns from the window and looks     

          at the board, a confusion covering his face. He bends and        

          looks around the board to his opponent. He sees the child on     

          the other side, sweating profusely and breathing heavy, eyes     

          closed with exhaustion.                                          

          Akeno bends himself straight again then notices the stares       

          of the other children, and attempts to shrink in size,           

          bringing his arms and head close to his body.                    

          A door opens at the far end of the room, the Instructor          

          enters and walks down to Akeno’s board, on the other side        

          and checks up on the exhausted child.                            

                              INSTRUCTOR                                   

                    Are you okay?                                          

          The Child nodes to him. The Instructor motions for the child     

          to move to the side, and he takes the child’s seat.              

          Akeno tight in his ball, notices nothing until his boards        

          begins to light up. He looks up and sees a small grouping of     

          white lights, slowly being to flicker and turn black. He         

          straightens himself, then closes his eyes.                       

          The white grids, all of them stop flickering. The ring of        

          black grids around his white begin to flash, then turn           

          white, but then the same black grids begin to flash again,       

          turning back to black.                                           

          Akeno concentration deepens as his face begins to reveal         

          just how how much, but his features begin to loosen and calm     

          as the sound of SINGING grows within his head. Akeno opens       

          his eye’s and turns again to the city behind him, the            

          SINGING grows louder.                                            

          The Instructor sits, eyes closed, face calm as he captures       

          another one of Akeno’s girds. But then the board remains         

          still for a second, and the Instructors’ face begins to          

          reveal confusion. One of his blocks begin to flash, one          

          lining Akeno’s last remaining grid, then another on the          

          opposite side of the board, then another, and another. The     

          Instructors face begins to strain, and he opens his eyes as      

          everyone of his grids begin to flash. As he looks on in          

          disbelief, everyone of his blocks are captured and the           

          winners NOISE sounds. Akeno stands, and walks to the side of     

          the board and bows to the Instructor.                            

                              AKENO                                        

                    Teacher, how is it a Technician is                     

                    granted permission to leave the                        

                    premises?                                              

          The Instructor looks up to the Akeno, he’s head still bent       

          waiting on his reply, and smiles to him proudly.                 

                              INSTRUCTOR                                   

                    Technician’s are the very reason                       

                    the world is able to function.                         

                    There is no service or commodity                       

                    valued greater, and no item more                       

                    sought. To be able to leave Kardon                     

                    premises a Technician must be of                       

                    weapon grade, so that they may                         

                    protect themselves if need be.                         

          Akeno looks up, turns to the window behind him then back to      

          his Instructor…         


November 3, 2011
Not this time NaNoWriMo! Not this time!

Day 3!

Novel Title: Youngest

Genre: Epic Fantasy

Total words: 9,401

Words left: 40,599

Novel Title: Lidia

Let’s not talk about it!

I’m not giving up on it though! I still think this might be, perhaps one of the best Science Fiction stories yet to be told! So I’ll just write away on ‘Youngest’ and when inspiration  hits, I’ll write like a MADMAN! 


November 3, 2011
“The hectic wonderful madness that is the beginning of things”…

The end of day 2, and the beginning of day 3. Only a hellah of a bunch of days left! o_O Yay?!

Novel Title: Youngest

Genre: Epic Fantasy

Total words: 6,501

Words left: 43,499

Novel Title: Lidia

Genre: Sicence Fiction

Total words: Zip, Zero, Ziltch!

Words left: Might as well be a Zillion!

Thank the Gods for that beautiful gift, seemingly handed down from their very finger tips! Yay for ENERGY DRINKS!


October 24, 2011
And so it nears…

NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month), coming up next month! Was for sure I knew which idea I was running with, till the walk this morning to work added another mighty contender! Oh my, decisions, decisions! ‘Youngest’ ~ ‘Lidia’ ~ ‘Cornelia’


April 1, 2011
Script Frenzy Daily Update! 04/01/2011 {10 pages!!!}

My script is a Cyberpunk film, with all the tasty cliches of the genre. Megacities, Megaslums, Corporation runned Republics within coverned countries, and super tech!

I don’t want to go to far in depth, but this truly will be a mind provoking completely new way of looking at the ‘ghost in the machine.’

A few visual pieces used for inspiration for the beginning where:

The now demolished Walled City of Kowloon! My story begins with the birth of the main character in a Megaslum known as the Grove, and Kowloon is the realist thing to that idea!

Kowloon Walled City

It being a Cyperpunk the line between the well to do, and the less fortunate has to be as blatant as the difference between night and day. Sadly something easly found here in the real world.

Slum

This is a pic I discovered years ago, when I was research for this anime film, I was writing, “Lords of Kowloon.” O it’s coming! ^_^ In the pics description it talked about how cats could be seen chasing rats across the river’s surface, because of the dense layer of trash that topped it. An image and idea that I remembered with the opening sequence.

River Trash


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